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daprdocs/content/en/concepts/observability-concept.md

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   Monitor applications through tracing, metrics, logs and health
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-When building an applications, understanding how the system is behaving is an important part of operating it - this includes having the ability to observe the internal flows of an application, gauging its performance and becoming aware of problems as soon as they occur. This is challenging for any system but even more so for a distributed system comprised of multiple microservices where a flow may start in one microservices but continue in another. Observability is critical in production environments but also useful during development to understand bottlenecks, improve performance and perform basic debugging across the span of microservices.
+When building an applications, understanding how the system is behaving is an important part of operating it - this includes having the ability to observe the internal calls of an application, gauging its performance and becoming aware of problems as soon as they occur. This is challenging for any system but even more so for a distributed system comprised of multiple microservices where a flow, made of several calls, may start in one microservices but continue in another. Observability is critical in production environments but also useful during development to understand bottlenecks, improve performance and perform basic debugging across the span of microservices.
 
-While some data points about an application can be gathered from the underlying infrastructure (e.g. memory consumption, CPU usage), other meaningful information must be collected from an "application aware" layer - one that can show how important flows are executed across microservices. This usually means a developer must add some code to instrument an application for this purpose. Often, instrumentation code is simply meant to send collected data such as traces and metrics to an external monitoring tool or service that can help store, visualize and analyze all this information. Having to maintain this code, which is not part of the core logic of the application, is another burden on the developer - sometimes requiring understanding monitoring tools APIs, using additional SDKs etc. This instrumentation may also add to the portability challenges of an application which may require different instrumentation depending on where the application is deployed (e.g. different cloud providers offer different monitoring solutions and an on-prem deployment might require an on-prem solution).
+While some data points about an application can be gathered from the underlying infrastructure (e.g. memory consumption, CPU usage), other meaningful information must be collected from an "application aware" layer - one that can show how an important series of calls is executed across microservices. This usually means a developer must add some code to instrument an application for this purpose. Often, instrumentation code is simply meant to send collected data such as traces and metrics to an external monitoring tool or service that can help store, visualize and analyze all this information. Having to maintain this code, which is not part of the core logic of the application, is another burden on the developer - sometimes requiring understanding monitoring tools APIs, using additional SDKs etc. This instrumentation may also add to the portability challenges of an application which may require different instrumentation depending on where the application is deployed (e.g. different cloud providers offer different monitoring solutions and an on-prem deployment might require an on-prem solution).
 
 ## Observability for your application with Dapr
 When building an application which is leveraging Dapr building blocks to perform service-to-service calls and pub/sub messaging, Dapr offers an advantage in respect to [distributed tracing]({{<ref tracing>}}) - Because this inter-service communication flows through the Dapr sidecar, the sidecar is in a unique position to offload the burden of application level instrumentation. 
 
 ### Distributed tracing
-Dapr can be [configured to emit tracing data]({{<ref setup-tracing.md>}}), and because Dapr does so using standard protocols such as the [Zipkin](https://zipkin.io) protocol, it can be easily integrated with multiple [monitoring backends]({{<ref supported-tracing-backends>}}). 
+Dapr can be [configured to emit tracing data]({{<ref setup-tracing.md>}}), and because Dapr does so using widely adopted protocols such as the [Zipkin](https://zipkin.io) protocol, it can be easily integrated with multiple [monitoring backends]({{<ref supported-tracing-backends>}}). 
 
-<img src="/images/observability-tracing.png" width=1000>
+<img src="/images/observability-tracing.png" width=1000 alt="Description of image">
 
 ### OpenTelemetry collector
 Dapr can also be configured to work with the [OpenTelemetry Collector]({{<ref open-telemetry-collector>}}) which offers even more compatibility with external monitoring tools.
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 <img src="/images/observability-sidecar.png" width=1000>
 
 ### Logging
-Dapr generates [logs]({{<ref "logs.md">}}) to provide visibility to sidecar operation and to help users identify issues and perform debugging. Logs events contain warning, error, info, and debug messages produced by Dapr system services. Dapr can also be configured to send logs to collectors such as [Fluentd]({{< ref fluentd.md >}}) and [Azure Monitor]({{< ref azure-monitor.md >}}) so they can be easily searched, analyzed and provide insights.
+Dapr generates [logs]({{<ref "logs.md">}}) to provide visibility into sidecar operation and to help users identify issues and perform debugging. Logs events contain warning, error, info, and debug messages produced by Dapr system services. Dapr can also be configured to send logs to collectors such as [Fluentd]({{< ref fluentd.md >}}) and [Azure Monitor]({{< ref azure-monitor.md >}}) so they can be easily searched, analyzed and provide insights.
 ### Metrics
-Metrics are the series of measured values and counts that are collected and stored over time. [Dapr metrics]({{<ref "metrics">}}) provide monitoring capabilities to understand the behavior of Dapr system services. For example, the service metrics between Dapr sidecars and user apps show call latency, traffic failures, error rates of requests etc. Dapr system services metrics show side car injection failures, health of the system services including CPU usage, number of actor placement made etc.
+Metrics are the series of measured values and counts that are collected and stored over time. [Dapr metrics]({{<ref "metrics">}}) provide monitoring capabilities to understand the behavior of the Dapr sidecar and system services. For example, the metrics between a Dapr sidecar and the user application show call latency, traffic failures, error rates of requests etc. Dapr [system services metrics](https://github.com/dapr/dapr/blob/master/docs/development/dapr-metrics.md) show side car injection failures, health of the system services including CPU usage, number of actor placement made etc.
 
 ### Health checks
 Dapr sidecar exposes an HTTP endpoint for [health checks]({{<ref sidecar-health.md>}}). With this API, user code can probe the Dapr sidecar to determine its status and identify issues with sidecar readiness.