* Reword lots of instances of 'will'
* Reword lots of instances of won't
* Reword lots of instances of we'll
* Eradicate you'll
* Eradicate 'be able to' type of phrases
* Eradicate 'unable to' type of phrases
* Eradicate 'has / have to' type of phrases
* Eradicate 'note that' type of phrases
* Eradicate 'in order to' type of phrases
* Redirect to official Chef and Puppet docs
* Eradicate gratuitous 'please'
* Reduce use of e.g.
* Reduce use of i.e.
* Reduce use of N.B.
* Get rid of 'sexagesimal' and correct some errors
* install page break out desktop, cloud, server, link updates
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* fixed an on-page link
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* added Anaconda Python 3.5.2 install/run to known issues
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* added notes re: Python 3.x not supported in setup and install
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* fixed heading levels in Cloud known errors
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* fixed links (moby --> docker), formatting
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* fixed on-page link list alignments for toc max/min topics
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* Clarify instructions to create a dockercloud-swarm-role
Add clarification to steps 1, 5, 6, and 8 under `create a dockercloud-swarm-role role with an embedded policy` to prevent misunderstandings.
* walked through the steps and made some copyedits
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* brought standard mode AWS linking topic up-to-date
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* added images for aws linking in swarm, improved procedure flow
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* add Cloud link to Azure topics
WIP: 1st draft includes, tabs re: SSH key topics
adding more Azure Cloud content and SSH includes
copyedits
cloud azure, aws topics organization, videos
incorporated review comments
copyedits, colour-coded TBD's
copyedits to make create a swarm w/AWS and Azure consistent
updated links to use new titles
added SSH key setup to the Swarm overview list of links
updated link services titles
add ssh to glossary, note autoredeploy limitations
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* screen snaps, updates per latest on staging
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* added link
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* resolved conflicts in TOC
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* added Azure accept EULA/enable subscription, more steps, snaps
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* fixed the comments to not break numbering
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* new snaps and review comments incorporated from Alberto and Ryan
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* added screen snaps, review comments, more steps
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* added screen snaps, detail to Azure create swarm
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* new snap showing linked AWS as provider
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* AWS screen snaps and detailed steps
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* AWS swarm name rules clarification
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* added x-refs to edition topics on config per reviews
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* added connect screen snap w/production commands, AWS pricing
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* added more code examples and clarification to swarm connect
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* added more code examples for Azure and AWS
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* Update cloud-on-aws-faq.md
* Update cloud-on-aws-faq.md
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Is my change appropriate? Or shall we list them as two steps as follows:
Before you upgrade your nodes:
1.Go to the detail page, xxx
2.If a new version is available, xxx
added heading and description of Swarm mode below table, tweaked headings
added Swarms screen snap
added a standard mode indicator to infrastructure overview title
re-organized order of topics in table and below
re-wording to swarm topic, added x-refs from d4mac, d4win to cloud topics
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edited screen snap
breaking out topics for Docker Cloud swarm mode
added another where-to-next link
added more where-to-next links
added back in on-page TOC for create swarm topic
incorporated Ryan's review comments on first draft
more Ryan's review comments, sweep thru all for consistency, notoc on short pages, etc.
removed duplicate link to 'create a new swarm in docker cloud'
Laura's comments incorporated
re-organized Cloud topics, added in Swarm Mode
Ryan's review comments on Cloud, added new type of advisory for Beta previews
more review comments, manage infrastructure --> standard mode
fixing image
testing cloud images
updates to Cloud welcome page for Swarm, non-Swarm descriptions
add new cloud repository image
retake of corrupted image
fixed the other instance of corrupted image by referencing the retake
fixing corrupted image on GitHub
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edited screen snap
breaking out topics for Docker Cloud swarm mode
added another where-to-next link
added more where-to-next links
added back in on-page TOC for create swarm topic
incorporated Ryan's review comments on first draft
more Ryan's review comments, sweep thru all for consistency, notoc on short pages, etc.
removed duplicate link to 'create a new swarm in docker cloud'
Laura's comments incorporated
re-organized Cloud topics, added in Swarm Mode
Ryan's review comments on Cloud, added new type of advisory for Beta previews
more review comments, manage infrastructure --> standard mode
fixing image
testing cloud images
updates to Cloud welcome page for Swarm, non-Swarm descriptions
add new cloud repository image
retake of corrupted image
fixed the other instance of corrupted image by referencing the retake
fixing corrupted image on GitHub
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