Commit Graph

14 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Gwendolynne Barr a55d0c9dfc
Cleanup (#6864) 2018-06-11 12:48:24 -07:00
Gwendolynne Barr c9e06d476f
Depersonalize docs (#6760) 2018-05-24 15:05:27 -07:00
Misty Stanley-Jones a4f5e30249
Various copyedits to reduce future tense, wordiness, and use of 'please' (#5788)
* Reword lots of instances of 'will'

* Reword lots of instances of won't

* Reword lots of instances of we'll

* Eradicate you'll

* Eradicate 'be able to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'unable to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'has / have to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'note that' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'in order to' type of phrases

* Redirect to official Chef and Puppet docs

* Eradicate gratuitous 'please'

* Reduce use of e.g.

* Reduce use of i.e.

* Reduce use of N.B.

* Get rid of 'sexagesimal' and correct some errors
2018-01-25 17:37:23 -08:00
Bhavin Gandhi 3123389ccb Add alt text to images which are missing it (#5047)
Signed-off-by: Bhavin Gandhi <bhavin7392@gmail.com>
2017-11-20 09:49:46 -08:00
parsenz c9624de61b Update connect-to-swarm.md (#3605)
you -> your
2017-06-19 12:05:54 -07:00
Victoria Bialas db8f48ff34 surfaced links to Cloud swarm connect options (#3618)
Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-06-14 16:54:40 -07:00
Victoria Bialas e198aff024 added topic on connecting to a Cloud swarm on d4mac, d4win (#3594)
* added topic on connecting to a Cloud swarm on d4mac, d4win

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* review comments re: desktop app menus

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-06-14 15:41:44 -07:00
Jason 235b57aacb Fix error in terminal command (#3348) 2017-05-23 10:24:16 -07:00
Victoria Bialas ab47785dc7 Machine unset env var, Cloud updates (#3146)
* added unset env instructions

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* machine env details, cloud swarm updates, copyedits

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* fix per review, add Azure to note

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-05-03 12:01:33 -07:00
Victoria Bialas e552c02d7b WIP: add Cloud link to Azure topics (#2713)
* add Cloud link to Azure topics

WIP: 1st draft includes, tabs re: SSH key topics

adding more Azure Cloud content and SSH includes

copyedits

cloud azure, aws topics organization, videos

incorporated review comments

copyedits, colour-coded TBD's

copyedits to make create a swarm w/AWS and Azure consistent

updated links to use new titles

added SSH key setup to the Swarm overview list of links

updated link services titles

add ssh to glossary, note autoredeploy limitations

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* screen snaps, updates per latest on staging

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added link

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* resolved conflicts in TOC

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added Azure accept EULA/enable subscription, more steps, snaps

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* fixed the comments to not break numbering

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* new snaps and review comments incorporated from Alberto and Ryan

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added screen snaps, review comments, more steps

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added screen snaps, detail to Azure create swarm

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* new snap showing linked AWS as provider

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* AWS screen snaps and detailed steps

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* AWS swarm name rules clarification

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added x-refs to edition topics on config per reviews

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added connect screen snap w/production commands, AWS pricing

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added more code examples and clarification to swarm connect

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added more code examples for Azure and AWS

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-05-02 13:28:55 -07:00
Bill a3a7ae1e0b replaced docker/docker with moby/moby (#2879)
* replaced docker/docker with moby/moby

* fixed incorrect name changes in release notes

* fixed mentions of moby/moby in code
2017-04-20 15:32:18 -05:00
Victoria Bialas 53442a4788 WIP: re-organize docker cloud topics, public intro to swarm mode
edited screen snap

breaking out topics for Docker Cloud swarm mode

added another where-to-next link

added more where-to-next links

added back in on-page TOC for create swarm topic

incorporated Ryan's review comments on first draft

more Ryan's review comments, sweep thru all for consistency, notoc on short pages, etc.

removed duplicate link to 'create a new swarm in docker cloud'

Laura's comments incorporated

re-organized Cloud topics, added in Swarm Mode

Ryan's review comments on Cloud, added new type of advisory for Beta previews

more review comments, manage infrastructure --> standard mode

fixing image

testing cloud images

updates to Cloud welcome page for Swarm, non-Swarm descriptions

add new cloud repository image

retake of corrupted image

fixed the other instance of corrupted image by referencing the retake

fixing corrupted image on GitHub

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-03-02 07:18:57 -08:00
Misty Stanley-Jones 6b0a5f9be4 Revert "re-organize docker cloud topics, public intro to swarm mode" 2017-02-23 11:44:11 -08:00
Victoria Bialas dc699e8558 WIP: re-organize docker cloud topics, public intro to swarm mode
edited screen snap

breaking out topics for Docker Cloud swarm mode

added another where-to-next link

added more where-to-next links

added back in on-page TOC for create swarm topic

incorporated Ryan's review comments on first draft

more Ryan's review comments, sweep thru all for consistency, notoc on short pages, etc.

removed duplicate link to 'create a new swarm in docker cloud'

Laura's comments incorporated

re-organized Cloud topics, added in Swarm Mode

Ryan's review comments on Cloud, added new type of advisory for Beta previews

more review comments, manage infrastructure --> standard mode

fixing image

testing cloud images

updates to Cloud welcome page for Swarm, non-Swarm descriptions

add new cloud repository image

retake of corrupted image

fixed the other instance of corrupted image by referencing the retake

fixing corrupted image on GitHub

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-02-23 10:58:36 -08:00