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3 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Misty Stanley-Jones a4f5e30249
Various copyedits to reduce future tense, wordiness, and use of 'please' (#5788)
* Reword lots of instances of 'will'

* Reword lots of instances of won't

* Reword lots of instances of we'll

* Eradicate you'll

* Eradicate 'be able to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'unable to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'has / have to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'note that' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'in order to' type of phrases

* Redirect to official Chef and Puppet docs

* Eradicate gratuitous 'please'

* Reduce use of e.g.

* Reduce use of i.e.

* Reduce use of N.B.

* Get rid of 'sexagesimal' and correct some errors
2018-01-25 17:37:23 -08:00
Victoria Bialas e90b12c425 Added <hr>'s below tabbed topics for SSH and test page (#4232)
* added <hr>'s below tabs

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* update Tabs topic on test.md to show use of <hr>'s

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added more information about toc_max/min

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-08-16 19:38:09 -07:00
Victoria Bialas e552c02d7b WIP: add Cloud link to Azure topics (#2713)
* add Cloud link to Azure topics

WIP: 1st draft includes, tabs re: SSH key topics

adding more Azure Cloud content and SSH includes

copyedits

cloud azure, aws topics organization, videos

incorporated review comments

copyedits, colour-coded TBD's

copyedits to make create a swarm w/AWS and Azure consistent

updated links to use new titles

added SSH key setup to the Swarm overview list of links

updated link services titles

add ssh to glossary, note autoredeploy limitations

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* screen snaps, updates per latest on staging

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added link

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* resolved conflicts in TOC

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added Azure accept EULA/enable subscription, more steps, snaps

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* fixed the comments to not break numbering

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* new snaps and review comments incorporated from Alberto and Ryan

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added screen snaps, review comments, more steps

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added screen snaps, detail to Azure create swarm

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* new snap showing linked AWS as provider

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* AWS screen snaps and detailed steps

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* AWS swarm name rules clarification

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added x-refs to edition topics on config per reviews

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added connect screen snap w/production commands, AWS pricing

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added more code examples and clarification to swarm connect

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>

* added more code examples for Azure and AWS

Signed-off-by: Victoria Bialas <victoria.bialas@docker.com>
2017-05-02 13:28:55 -07:00