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Author SHA1 Message Date
Will Witman a52a6745a2 Minor edit in last paragraph of What is Istio. (#1741) 2018-07-11 06:54:19 -07:00
Rigs Caballero dbd5268385 Edit the What is Istio file for clarity. (#1737)
* Edit the What is Istio file for clarity.

This edit includes:

* The rewrite of all instances of passive voice
* The simplification of complex sentence structures
* The splitting of run-on-sentences
* The disambiguation of relative pronouns
* The removal of conjunctives such as should, could, and would
* The replacement of long series with lists
* The improvement of punctuation
* The addition of emphatic markup including links

The purpose behind the edits is to improve content flow and allow easier
consumption for international audiences. The simpler structures will also have a
positive impact in the translation.
2018-07-10 12:20:38 -07:00
Martin Taillefer 181605b27e
Consolidate the security concept pages into a single page. (#1721)
* Consolidate the security concept pages into a single page.

- This updates the security concept material to be on a single page, which matches the
change done last week for the rest of the concept material. This ends up being a less clicky
more directed introduction for newcomers to the platform.

- While I was there, I moved the redundant What is Istio page from our about section and stuck
the content at the top of the What is Istio page in the Concepts section.
2018-07-10 10:26:19 -07:00
Martin Taillefer 1d355094cf Simplify the Concepts section. (#1649) 2018-07-02 06:32:04 -07:00