From 7aa332d14f4ce1e1f490e7a33ca8ef12799e8f1e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ciprian Hacman Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2020 08:32:13 +0300 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: John Gardiner Myers --- docs/operations/images.md | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/operations/images.md b/docs/operations/images.md index bdb970ab06..667b6377a3 100644 --- a/docs/operations/images.md +++ b/docs/operations/images.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Images -Starting Kubernetes 1.18, the default images used by _kops_ are the **[official Ubuntu 20.04](#ubuntu-2004-focal)** images. +As of Kubernetes 1.18 the default images used by _kops_ are the **[official Ubuntu 20.04](#ubuntu-2004-focal)** images. You can choose a different image for an instance group by editing it with `kops edit ig nodes`. You should see an `image` field in one of the following formats: @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ You can choose a different image for an instance group by editing it with `kops * `/` specifies an AMI by its owner's account ID and name properties * `/` specifies an AMI by its [owner's alias](#owner-aliases) and name properties -Using the AMI id is precise, but ids vary by region. It is often more convenient to use the `/`, if equivalent images have been copied to various regions with the same name. +Using the AMI id is precise, but ids vary by region. It is often more convenient to use the `/` if equivalent images with the same name have been copied to other regions. ```yaml image: ami-00579fbb15b954340 @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Please [report](https://github.com/kubernetes/kops/issues/new/choose) any change ### Debian 9 (Stretch) -Debian 9 is based on Kernel version **4.9** which has number of known bugs that affect it and may be noticed with larger clusters: +Debian 9 is based on Kernel version **4.9** which has a number of known bugs that affect it and which may be noticed with larger clusters: This release is **EOL**, which means that the Debian Security Team no longer handles security fixes. That is now the responsibility/purview of the LTS team, which is a group of volunteers who are paid by donations to Debian LTS. @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ aws ec2 describe-images --region us-east-1 --output table \ ### Ubuntu 18.04 (Bionic) -Ubuntu 18.04 is based on Kernel version **4.15** which has number of known bugs that affect it and may be noticed with larger clusters: +Ubuntu 18.04 is based on Kernel version **4.15** which has a number of known bugs that affect it and which may be noticed with larger clusters: * [kubernetes/kubernetes#56903](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/issues/56903) * [kubernetes/kubernetes#67577](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/issues/67577) @@ -212,13 +212,13 @@ aws ec2 describe-images --region us-east-1 --output table \ ### CoreOS -Support for CoreOS is deprecated and was removed in _kops_ 1.18. +Support for CoreOS was removed in _kops_ 1.18. You should consider using [Flatcar](#flatcar) as a replacement. ### Debian 8 (Jessie) -Support for Debian 8 (Jessie) is deprecated and was removed in _kops_ 1.18. +Support for Debian 8 (Jessie) was removed in _kops_ 1.18. ### Kope.io