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Signed-off-by: shichun-0415 <lishichun@pingcap.com>
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@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ For example, execute the following command to check the status of the `tikv-test
tiup cluster display tikv-test
```
The command output should include the instance ID, role, host, listening port, and status (the status of the cluster is `Down`/`inactive` because it is not started yet), and directory information.
The command output includes the instance ID, role, host, listening port, and status (the status of the cluster is `Down`/`inactive` because it is not started yet), and directory information.
## Step 6: Start the TiKV cluster

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@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ To deploy a TiKV cluster with multiple nodes for test, take the following steps:
--log-file=tikv3.log
```
Use the [pd-ctl](https://github.com/pingcap/pd/tree/master/tools/pd-ctl) tool to verify whether PD and TiKV are successfully deployed:
You can use the [pd-ctl](https://github.com/pingcap/pd/tree/master/tools/pd-ctl) tool to verify whether PD and TiKV are successfully deployed:
```
./pd-ctl store -d -u http://192.168.199.113:2379

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@ -17,14 +17,14 @@ This section introduces the preparation works needed before upgrading your TiKV
Before upgrading your TiKV cluster, you first need to upgrade TiUP.
1. Upgrade the TiUP version. It is recommended that the TiUP version be `1.4.0` or later.
1. Upgrade the TiUP version to `1.4.0` or later.
```bash
tiup update --self
tiup --version
```
2. Upgrade the TiUP Cluster version. It is recommended that the TiUP Cluster version be `1.4.0` or later.
2. Upgrade the TiUP Cluster version to `1.4.0` or later.
```bash
tiup update cluster
@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Skip this step if one of the following situations applies:
+ After the upgrade, you want to use default parameter values of v5.0 for the unmodified configuration items.
{{< /info >}}
1. Enter the `vi` editing mode to edit the topology file:
1. Edit the topology file in `vi` editing mode:
```bash
tiup cluster edit-config <cluster-name>
@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Skip this step if one of the following situations applies:
2. Refer to the format of [topology](https://github.com/pingcap/tiup/blob/release-1.4/embed/templates/examples/topology.example.yaml) configuration template and fill the parameters you want to modify in the `server_configs` section of the topology file.
3. After the modification, <kbd>:</kbd> + <kbd>w</kbd> + <kbd>q</kbd> to save the change and exit the editing mode. Enter <kbd>Y</kbd> to confirm the change.
3. Save the changes and exit the editing mode.
## Perform a rolling upgrade to the TiKV cluster